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《Rose》Aronville

Reviewer : therosepoetk

Aronville by Wordchantress

So I like how you made the title the setting of your story, which is typical yet always overused. So I was slightly worried, but seeing that it's a crime thriller where the setting is crucial, it's an amazing choice. The cover too is ominous and thrilling, so I'm already pretty excited. The blurb is really structured and detailed, which is good. I don't see any work to be done, at least not yet. The opening and plot are stunning. I love how you are able to craft the kind of plot that requires so much character development and involvement, which I admire.

The characters, to expand on that, are really diverse. I want them to have more personal relationships with each other, as that brings out more of the mystery element. (Like a whodunnit kind of plot, you know?). The emotional appeal is the strongest at the most recent segment, where I am actually annoyed that you left me at a cliffhanger. How dare you be this good of a writer! This is evil (but also great, it makes reviewing a lot easier). The flow is also well done, as well as the grammar. Overall, I really like the story.

Keep up the thrilling work Udita!