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《Ana》Hi Fae

Reviewer:ceo_kjinnie
Written by: Egwuji

➼COVER (10/10)
The cover was lovely. The fonts used were pretty and the colors go well with each other. The image used in the cover also matched the overall aesthetic of the story.

➼TITLE (10/10)
I did a little research on the word ‘fae’ to get a better understanding of the title and as I kept reading the story further I could clearly see why you chose this title for the story.

➼BLURB (10/10)
The blurb was on point and of the average length. It doesn't give out any spoilers and made me want to read more, which is great!

➼PLOT (10/10)
The plot was a mixture of history and fantasy which was quite interesting to me. I like how you incorporated a parallel magical dimension to Britain.

➼ORIGINALITY (10/10)
Originality is always appreciated, keep it up!

➼ WRITING STYLE (8/10)
Your writing style was quite impressive and a kind that has readers hooked. Keep in mind to not over-explain/describe everything. Just the right amount of explanation would be enough for readers to understand the context.

➼CHARACTER AND STORY DEVELOPMENT (10/10)
Love how the characters were briefly introduced in the beginning of the book. Character aesthetics and face claims were an interesting add-on to your story and it certainly helps readers visualize them better. The characters were diverse and emotionally very appealing which connected me as a reader.
As for the story development, it was smooth. I noticed that ‘His Fae’ is a series, so keep up the smooth progressions and interesting plotline and I’m sure people will love reading the stories that follow too.

➼SETTING/WORLDBUILDING (9/10)
I love how you explained the surroundings gradually yet covering every single detail. The settings gave me ‘Animal Crossing: New Horizons’ vibe. It’s quite the task when it comes to balancing your story with just the right amount of description, it is also a mistake most authors make. Too much explanation and detail can bore the readers but you managed to balance it when it comes to the setting description.

➼GRAMMAR & SPELLING (9/10)
There are only a few grammatical errors here and there, and most of them are silly mistakes that are caused due to a slip of the mind or simple punctuation mistakes. I’m sure you already know this but I recommend using Hemmingway Editor/Grammarly while proofreading to make it simpler.

➼ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT (8/10)
Overall, I had a great time reading your work. This is the perfect novel for readers who enjoy fantasy and romance. I’ll certainly recommend this to my friends.

➼OVERALL (94/100)
Thanks a lot for choosing me as your reviewer! Have a great day/night, Sir Victor Hastings.
                        ~Ana