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《Genius》November Story [KTH x READER ]

Reviewer: Genius_MinSwag
Book: November Story [KTH x READER ]
Author: Harry2411

COVER

I love the cover and the banners used. It gives autumn vibes and looks cool. The quote and the pictures used goes well with its theme. Overall, it can definitely attract readers.

TITLE:

The title is a bit common which can be a disadvantage for yur story.But, it fits with the story perfectly. The cover and title give me autumn vibes and I love them. But you can change the title to something else. Here are some suggestions:

November 2001 (The year they met first time)

Our November

Autumn love

Falling leaves

Leaves of my love

You can change it to something else too. These are only some names I suggested.

BLURB:

The blurb was just the copy of the first chapter but made me a little curious. But you can improve it by writing it in a form of poem. I personally love blurbs written in a form of poem [ I always write blurb of my books in the form of poem ].So, you should focus on the blurb because that's what the reader sees before deciding if they want to continue reading or not

PLOT:

The plot is very common. The boy fell in love with his friend but couldn't tell her and let her go. I have seen many stories like this, so this idea isn't really out of the box.

WRITING STYLE:

Now this is where you can improve. Your writing style is neither really good nor bad. But, we can definitely improve it. You should try to be more descriptive and you can also use synonyms to make it look nice. For example, in the first chapter,

You can write some description about the surrounding before starting it.

FOR EXAMPLE: The sound of wind blowing and leaves falling can be heard. The peaceful view of the Han river and little squirrels on the trees making it a perfect place to sit and enjoy the beauty of the season. It was November, which means autumn, the season of falling leaves and comfort. A cute pair of a little boy and s small girl were playing , their screams filled with joy and enthusiasm.

This is a very short example. You can even make it better by writing it in your own way. Overall, it can be improved.

GRAMMAR:

Grammar is important because bad grammar can break the flow of the reader and make them disconnected from the story. I did find a few grammatical and tense errors but you can always look into the book and correct them. The punctuations and commas were perfectly placed. Overall, the grammar was good.

SIDE NOTE:

I am not saying anything about the characters since its only a one shot. But, I think you can make a separate chapter for the letter Taehyung wrote for y/n. Its just a personal opinion. You can also use the last letter at the end as an epilogue. Don't worry, its just a suggestion. You don't need to follow it.