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《Rose》Arranged Marriage

Reviewer: therosepoetk
Written by: Mitali2203

Hey! It’s you again!! (Sorry, I had to). I start again with admiring your choice of title. It’s interesting how you chose a spectrum in which a lot of people struggle to accept themselves and others for, so I think that really makes readers think and ponder what such a broad term means to them. As well, the cover is also really pretty and sends out that vibe of young love and mushy romantic vibes (both of which personally make me recoil), which I think are essential here. When talking about the theme of love, it’s important that you as a creator exemplify and establish how deep you are getting with it, and what kind of emotions that you plan to manipulate within that process. Fortunately, this does not seem like much of a problem to you, which I find relieving. The blurb reflects this as well, which insinuates that I’m pretty impressed. Your opening and plot are wonderful, nothing that I can nitpick here. However, I’d like to again raise the hand that says I am not at all a fanfiction kind of person, nor do I support such groups the way others do. (Don’t get me wrong - I love k-pop, but not just supporting them the way others tend to do. Such opinions stay valid to myself). Instead, I’d also like to remark that I can’t really judge your characters this way, but I do admit that their portrayals are mediocre of a sort. Your emotional appeal is nice, but I think your grammar, coherence, and such could use a little work. Other than that, this was another unique take on fanfiction and a cute story overall. Keep up the show stopping work Mitali!