《Nur》Love from the Graveyard

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Reviewer: SweetAsRasmalai-

Love from the Graveyard by kimsuga86

Again I'm happy to review another book for kimsuga86 I'm sure this book is just as good as your other ones, I'm grateful that I get to keep on reviewing your books!

━━━━ Cover
The cover is so aesthetic and simple clearly makes a connection with the story. However, it lacks a unique touch that could help it gauge more attention. If it was made more unique it could help the story pop out and gain the attention of the readers more easily.

━━━━ Title
❝ Love from the Graveyard ❞ You always come up with a unique title for your stories, which clearly makes a strong connection towards the main content. Seriously I love the title which really hooks the readers. Great job kimsuga86

━━━━ Description/blurb
The blurb was so short just in two lines but it was so perfect and sweet. Which gives a little bit clue about the storyline but maybe adding a little more lines can make it even better it's just a suggestion.

━━━━ Storyline/plot
It's a sweet-Romantic story which I really loved reading so far. It's a Love story of Seokjin and Luce, they met in a graveyard and they slowly fall in the circle of Love and there was little Chaos before they confess their love which usually happen in every single stories but here it felt so cute you really carried out the story well. I expected a plot from you but you kept it so simple but I like it.

━━━━ Writing style
Your writing style is sophisticated that lets you write on a descriptive level. As usual you're writing always seems so realistic. As i said before I adore your writing style it has something unique that keeps the readers hooked on. yet I can't seem to turn away from reading because of how wonderfully you've written every sentence. Your descriptive style of writing is on point and I feel like I'll learn a lot from you by just reading your story. you really got me hooked I really love your writing style

━━━━ Characters
The characters and their development on feeling, actions and understanding are well understood. The build up of the characters and everything revolving around them was flawlessly planned out and implemented. I seriously loved how seokjin kept on talking about foods (I felt like me for a sec lol) he's such a gentleman and Luce she's such a hard working girl and strong by her heart.  I loved the way you portrayed your characters

━━━━ Grammar/Spelling
There is a need for improvement in grammar and spelling. Proofreading and revision should be able to solve all these issues quite easily and stop readers from getting sidetracked due to any mistakes.

━━━━ Engagement of the reader
Another great story of yours loved it.The story was very interesting and immediately gauged the attention. It was very interesting to read and the plot was very original! Wonderful read that I would definitely recommend.

this is such a sweet and heart touching story . Looking forward to more of your works

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