Reviewer:_bluexgrey_
Reviewing on: stupidyulie
Book: Vessel of the Lost Soul
Cover- 5/5
- Great cover, it looks magical and it's very nice!Title- 5/5
- Title is great! Unique and it gives you a small glimpse of what the story will be about.Blurb- 10/10
- Also great blurb! It is neat and can easily catch the readers attention, I like how you added some questions at the end to get the readers attention on how the story will flow and on how Gayle's life will turn out.Plot- 10/10
- Great plot, I love your creativity and how the plot is very interesting. It gives me Percy Jackson vibes, I must say :DGrammar and Punctualizations- 10/10
- Very well written,Character- 10/10
- I like how you managed to create different creatures and their names etc. The idea for the orb being the prince is great and it's very niceStoryline- 10/10
- The flow of the story is great, :DEnjoyment- 5/5
- Very much enjoyed it! Originality- 9/10
- It is very original but I gave it a 9 because It's like you combined the little prince and percy Jackson which is great I must say but it also gives a hint of other fantasy movies.Details: 5/5
- Well detailed, doesn't lack detail and it is very imaginary when you read it. :DEngagement: 10/10
- It is engaging and for me the story just fits in my preference so I loved it, very well written.Writing style: 10/10
- The paragraphs aren't too overwhelming and it's just the right length for the whole story. POV's are great, I liked how you wrote Gayle's POV and the prince's. It looks effortless (a good thing) and very well written.Overall: 99/100
Notes:
Great job on your story! I'll add it to my recommended book in my reading lists! Keep up the good work! I'll continue reading it too <3
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