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《Genius》 Words at a death's door: letters of a ghost

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Author: sarada3003
Book: Words at a death's door: letters of a ghost
Reviewer: Genius_MinSwag

COVER

The cover isn't much amusing and attractive and doesn't really match the story theme, according to me, but, we can definitely fix this. Here are some suggestions, for you:

1) You can take a picture of a door( with a flower hanging on it) and then write it with beautiful fonts

2) you can take a picture of a piece of paper with a torn teddy and a rose kept on the sides (if that's possible)

Basically , what I am saying is try to make it more aesthetic and eye catching, using love colours for font can help

TITLE

The title is very common and don't rrally connect to the story. But, we can definitely fix it. Here are some suggestions:

The letter

Dead letters

Your memory

These are just some examples. You can make it even better with your imagination

BLURB

The blurb is a rwlly important part of the story as it makes the reader to decide whether they would like to continue or not.

The plain is very plainly written and didn't really amused me. Try using a quote or poetic sentence in the beginning and then write it in form of dialogues

You need to focus it on this

PLOT

The plot isn't very unique or out of the box. So, the idea didn't really surprised me.

WRITING STYLE

YOUR writing style is average and peetty plain. You sgpuld try to make it more descriptive so that the reads can connect to the story. Try to put your feelings in the form of words and use synonyms instead of simple words, it will make it look fancy.

GRAMMER

The grammer was good and I rarely found any spelling errors or punctuation mistake.

Good job

SIDE NOTE: You should add some description about the character in the beginning and can start it with a dialogue and the scene of the character on the airport and then start the story.

P.S. : I took way too much time then required, really sorry for the delay, I was caught up with life and stuff. I apologize for this unprofessional behaviour.