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《Kailyn》 A Story Told In Verse

Reviewer: Kailucy
Written by: MeowMeow422

Title:
The title is good. It flows and fits the genre. It could possibly be better but I don't have any suggestions on how to do so.
Cover:
I like the cover mostly. I think the detail with the small books adds a lot to it. The fonts could look better in my opinion. The font for "verse" looks great but the other words are lacking. The frame is cute and I like the stars in the background. Overall, I think it could be a lot better and more eye-catching.
Overall:
I think you're a wonderful writer and I really enjoyed reading your poems. Each one had a different feel and I loved the rhyming sequence. The rhythm was great and stayed throughout the collection. Several times I stared at the screen in awe of the last lines. Breathtakingly beautiful poems.

Thoughts on individual poems:
Shooting for a star:
Firstly, the title of this poem is precious. I could slightly guess what it would be about but it still amazed me. The simplicity in the words yet it was laced with so much feeling. It was a beautiful start.

The girl:
You said this one was going to be haunting and it didn't disappoint. I stared at my ceiling when I finished it. At first, I wasn't sure if it would be haunting enough for my liking but the last two verses blew me away.
Little boy:

I felt the need to bring this one out cause of how well it's written. It's so dark and sad. I love poetry that makes me feel and this one did just that.