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✦ { Fuzzi } Stolen Moments- A collection of short stories

Client: lostlovefairy

Designer: fuzziwrites

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‭ Title + Book Cover‬‭ : 4.5/5‬

‭ The title is informative, effectively telling me everything I need to know about what your story is about: an‬ anthology of heartfelt stories. The cover is also quite well done, with solid composition between the text‬ and visual elements. One suggestion I would make is changing the font for "Moments" to be more legible.‬ The letters blend into each other, making it a little hard to read.‬

‭ Blurb‬‭ : 2.5/5‬

‭The blurb is quite mysterious, consisting only of a series of questions that hit rather personally. What the‬ blurb does well is that it establishes a clear emotional throughline—love, heartbreak, loss, and the‬ complex ways we cope and grow. However, the long string of questions may begin to feel repetitive;‬ trimming or grouping them could heighten impact.‬

Additionally, the blurb does not quite invite the reader to actually open your book. It invites them to‬ introspect, but it doesn't give the reader a clearer idea of what to expect inside. In fact, the questions‬ actually initially led me to believe that this work was a series of one-shots, which doesn't appear to be the‬ case once I actually read it. I'll discuss this more in the plot structure section.‬‭

Introduction‬‭ : 9/10 How well do the first three chapters hook me in? In the case of short stories/anthologies, it‬ would be the first chapter/scene of each individual story.

‭The first chapter avoids using names entirely, instead relying solely on the pronouns "I," "you," and "he." This creates a sense of immediacy and emotional rawness, drawing the reader in as if they're‬ experiencing the emotions firsthand. It does seem to me that withholding names here is intentional—it‬ allows the focus to remain on the feelings rather than the identities.‬

Following the first chapter, the next chapters start divulging the story of Naina and Advik, namely starting‬ with their breakup and the emotional fallout that follows. Here, perhaps some urgency with introducing‬ names at the beginning of the chapter would improve the remainder of the introductory chapters. Doing‬ so would help ground the reader more quickly in who these characters are, especially after the abstract‬ and emotionally driven introduction, and provide clearer context for the unfolding events in the rest of the‬ opening chapters.‬

Nevertheless, these scenes are poignant and affecting, hooking the reader with the central question:‬ what went wrong?‬‭ Notably, the narrative doesn't shy‬‭ away from revealing red flags (i.e. Advik lashing out‬ with‬‭ physical‬‭ violence, and threatening to end his‬‭ life if Naina leaves) in their relationship, giving telling‬ glimpses into the dynamics that may have led to the heartbreak.‬

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 Worldbuilding‬‭ : 6.5/10‬

‭ The worldbuilding feels intentionally minimal, with most of the narrative focus placed on developing the‬ characters and their emotional arcs. This works well given the story's introspective and character-driven‬ nature. However, the fragmented, non-linear timeline makes it difficult to get a clear sense of when certain‬ events are happening, which can be disorienting. Since time and setting are key components of‬ worldbuilding, a bit more clarity around the time period or contextual cues within each chapter would help‬ anchor the reader more firmly in the story's world.‬‭