Hey all! As you can tell by the title, I would like for you as the readers to give me any feedback you have regarding this story!
So, I want to hear your thoughts. What works about the story? What doesn't work? Is there something I could add or subtract? Do you like the second-person perspective (you, yours, etc), or would third-person (she, her, etc) be better? Has the tone and voice stayed the same to you, or has it changed? Anything else you can come up with, lay it all out.
I genuinely and sincerely want to hear what you all think. Good or bad, I'm open to criticism. Feel free to comment on this note, I'd highly appreciate it!
-your humble author
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Into the Fire: An Eddie Munson x Reader Story
FanfictionYou're Dustin's sister, Y/N Henderson. Dustin hosts a D&D campaign at your house over the course of a weekend, and you're intrigued by the game. But you're even more interested in the club's leader, Eddie Munson. But an accident on your way to schoo...
