~ Another Far-side Look At Descriptive Writing ~

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"Oh, Jason, take me!" she panted, her breasts heaving - Like a student on 6 Red Bulls a night!

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He was as lame as a duck - Not the metaphorical lame duck either, but a real duck that was actually lame. Maybe from stepping on a land mine or something!

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Her artistic sense was exquisitely refined - Like someone who can tell butter from "I Can't Believe It's Not Butter!"

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The ballerina rose gracefully en pointe and extended one slender leg behind her - Like a dog at a lamp-post!

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The revelation that his marriage of 30 years had disintegrated because of his wife's infidelity came as a rude shock - Like a surcharge at a formerly surcharge-free ATM!

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The dandelion swayed in the gentle breeze - Like an oscillating electric fan set on medium!

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It was a working class tradition - Like fathers chasing kids around with their power tools!

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He was deeply in love. When she spoke, he thought he heard bells - As if she were a garbage truck reversing!

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She was as easy - As the Daily Star crossword!

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At first he wasn't sure about her but she grew on him - Like she was a colony of E. coli and he was room-temperature Supermarket beef!

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She walked into the bedroom Like a centipede with 98 missing legs!

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Her voice had that tense, grating quality - Like a first-generation thermal paper fax machine that needed a band tightened!

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It hurt the way your tongue hurts - After you accidentally staple it to the wall!

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