Judge Me Not

Pretty fish by ShawtieDoowop, reviewed by HeBrokeMyHeart

Title – Pretty Fish

Author – ShawtieDoowop

Genre - Sci-fi & Adventure

Rating - PG- 13

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Blurb - Tucker is a nothing more than a coastal boy, who enjoys the water and the ocean. For 15 years he has dived these waters in search of peace and a little chunk of harmless adventure. On one single dive, his core beliefs are shattered to bits and his life changes forever with the appearance of the prettiest fish he's ever laid eyes on. Unable to keep away, Tucker finds himself in a battle between an angry father, an unruly angel, and the voice of his heart.

Review:

This book blew me away, it was really good in description and made me picture it every step of the way to the end. So far there is only three chapters but YOU SHOULD STILL READ IT! There were some negatives though but only a smidgen! First of all I would have liked to see some dialogue, as this helps us engage with the characters a little bit more than just being in their minds. Second you did have some grammar, punctuation errors but not a lot. Just some obvious ones such as, never write in capitals when writing a book if you want to express something than put a exclamation mark at the end and it will give it the same effect, also don’t write numbers. I did also pick up on one bit were you used capitals when it should have been in italics; “Damn, how much did he drink last night?”

Other than them minor issues it was a really good book; so far. I would suggest anyone who likes fantasy, sc-fi and mystery to read it because it really does deserve to be in the ‘what’s hot’ list. Here’s just a quick summary of what I have gathered so far. The book is about merman’s and merwoman’s that are different from what you would suspect them to look like, they are aqua and have magical abilities. The book is in two different p.o.v so far, so if you do read this just check at top before you read so you don’t get confused. The other p.o.v is from a man who loves the ocean and all the things in it. I’m guessing in the future the man ‘Tucker’ is going to discover the ‘Alcadin’. Also I love Paul Walker who you casted ‘Tucker’ for :). All in all, this is very well written book which needs to get a lot more attention!

From HeBrokeMyHeart/ Annalise Butler 

8.5* - 10*

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