Judge Me Not

Dancing in the Dark by Shrienrox(Reviewed by JanBear_04

Title- Dancing in the Dark

Author- Shrienrox

Genre- Romance & Mystery/Suspense

Rating- G

Synopsis- None at the moment.

Review-

 To be honest, I didn't really know what I was going to be reading, seeing as though there is no synopsis right now but the title gave me an idea, which I liked without spoiling everything. I very much think you should write a synopsis when you get the chance to give the readers a hint at what they'll be expecting when reading your story. Another thing is when I first checked out your chapter before I started reading it just to add it to my library so I wouldn't forget to review, it was only one chapter with 11 pages and I was like WHAT?? But then I realized you divided it up into chapters today or maybe yesterday which I think was a really nice fix. 11 pages for a first chapter is very much overwhelming to a reader which is why I was quite shocked but now I realized it wouldn't have mattered to me if you made the 11 pages into chapters only because it was amazing!!

 You have a way of writing that has readers wanting more. It's quite simplistic but has an elegant format in the sense that you have every thing included in the chapter to make it wonderful. I know there is a bit of memories that include rape, but you write it in a way that isn't graphic which I very much appreciate and it isn't heavy. The emotion is so sad, and I can almost feel what Hazel is going through with all the experiences she's shared. The dialogue is very realistic and I think what I enjoy about your story the most would likely be the direction you're headed in. It seems like you've planned out every thing in a way that is perfect step by step. Another thing follows the previous act, etc, etc. It's a very lovely story but the only thing I would advice you of is your lack of detail and your small amount of puncuation and grammar errors. Overall I thought it was a great read and I think you should definitely promote your story much more than you have. It deserves more than 7 votes! I really hope you continue Dancing in the Dark!

Rating- 8/10

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By- JanBear_04/Janaka =)

*If you would like to read this story it will be in our library!