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Behind The Eyes by LaurenNicholeSerafin [Review- LovelornSighs]

The author remains of Wattpad but with no works and the story has been taken off Wattpad.

Title: Behind The Eyes

Author: LaurenNicholeSerafin

Genre(s): Mystery/ Suspense, Poetry

Rating: PG-13

Blurb: Miditon, North Carolina seemed to be a happy, family oriented town, home to the North Ridge Fighting Tigers. But behind all the lies, hold eight seemingly happy teenagers. Each has his own story. Will their problems lead to a more fatal decision? 

Review:

First off, I have to say that I'm not the most experienced with reviewing poetry. But you have been waiting patiently for a while, and since no one has taken you up yet, I'll be doing it. First of all, I love your summary and idea. I like the idea of using poetry to express all their different stories. Oh and by the way: 'Each has his own story'. Correct that to a 'Each has their own story.' And I also like how the last sentance implies how really severe this situation is (considering suicide is very serious). 

I have to admire how simple your poems are. They don't contain many words. But those few words say as much as a thousand sentences. There really isn't much to say about each of these teenagers' situations. Your short poem was enough to utter all their hidden emotions. 

Oh goodness, I should probably warn you that I get mushy fast. Your poems made me cry, and if I may say so myself: that is definitely an accomplishment. [While I am mushy, there are very few works that have been tear-jerking enough to make me cry.]

Good job, and I think it's safe to say you've earned yourself a fan!

Rating:10/10

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