Judge Me Not

s m i l e by totallyinsane [Review- LovelornSighs]

Title: s m i l e

Author: totallyinsane

Genre(s): Humour, Romance

Rating: PG

Blurb: Smile. You never know who may be falling in love with it.

When you smile, I smile.

A smile is a language that even a baby understands.

Don’t cry because it’s over, SMILE because it happened.

A smile is a curve that sets everything straight.

A friendly look, a kindly smile, one good act, and life’s worthwhile.

Smile – it’s the second best thing you can do with your lips.

Review:

I love your summary! Haha, especially the last line there. I wonder what the best thing to do with your lips is? *blushes*

Anywho, on to the review. Oh my god! I'm completely mind-blown! I like that you say 'imagine this' at the beginning of each description. And your descriptions are really vivid, and I can imagine it in my head. And I have all these crazy visions going through my head and I'm trying to decipher what exactly you mean by each description. I also love the ending! It seems so wistful with a touch of forlornness. I really like the last sentence: 'And my love for the boy has never faded.' I also like (how many times have I said like in this review?) that you don't mention names, but refer to the characters neutrally. 

Just review this a bit, because I find there are minor punctuation and spelling errors. Otherwise, great job and keep writing! You earned yourself a fan! :)

Rating: 9.5/10

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~Lilly/ LovelornSighs