Judge Me Not

Shattering Reality by Pendancer (Reviewed by Lilshrimp)

Title:Shattering Reality

Author: PenDancer

Genres: Romance, Humor

 Rating: None

 Summary/ Blurb:Stella knows about the camping trip with her aunt and uncle. What she doesn't know is there are four other kids camping with them, including an older boy who's not what he seems. All she cares about is there is a lake where she can dive over and over into the water. When things begin to go wrong, however, Stella has to work with her fellow campers to form a truce and set things back to how they're supposed to be. Adventure, danger and romance follow an unknowing Stella as she sets of for the most exciting camping trip of her life.

 Review: It’s a sweet, short prologue. It is written most peculiarly, but it is good. It’s written from Stella’s perspective, and it is really hard to write a review on a two page book.

     The story doesn’t get far, but from what I can tell, it’s headed in the right direction. It has an original plot line, and an original dialogue. Stella is spunky, and fun and most people will fall in love with her. Even though near the end, we just meet Adam, we can’t help but fall in love with him. Pendancer does an amazing job writing the characters to make them loveable.

     The only thing I could say about this is to add more detail. Your prologue could have had so much more detail, and been so much better. You have potential with this story, and it can go far. Just add detail and make your own path, don’t fall into a cliché!

 Rating: 7/10 for being so short, it’s hard to give a fair rating. After you add more, I will gladly edit and alter the review if you would like! =]

Shattering Reality was reviewed by Tara/ lilshrimp

*This story will be in our library so check it out!