Judge Me Not

Somnia by Mystified-Soul [Review by: Pinkypromise99]

Title: Somnia

Author:  Mystified-Soul

Genre: Fantasy, Romance 

Rate: PG-13

Summary: It's a big responsibility when it's your job to protect humanity from their dreams. Add to that the fact that you have a knack for finding trouble and you would know exactly how Maya feels.

It was an ordinary night and Maya was doing what she, and all the other Somnia's had been trained to do their whole lives; take away nightmares and destroy all Insomnia's you stumbled across.

That's when she met her. That's when she met Eva, the girl that would cause all kinds of trouble.

~~*~~*~<3~*~~*~~

The Review:

~~*~~*~<3~*~~*~~

Okay, so far there is only one chapter- which I read- and was completely alluring! Honestly, I when I first started reading, I thought it was hard to follow and a bit boring, but that didn't last long at all! As soon as Maya entered Eva's home, things not only started to pick up, but made sense as well. I loved how you wrote the story out. One of the most important things I've had to learn in writing is that  the characters existed before we started to write about them, so when you write I stories, I try to keep that in mind. Anyway, I'm bringing this up because you did just that. The reason I was confused in the beginning was because I didn't understand Maya's past or her life prior to when you started writing about her; then as I kept reading- it all made sense! She's a Somnia! 

Through this first chapter, I can already tell that you've got a strong plot and storyline. The only critical thing I found while reading was the same thing that every writer, myself included, has: punctuations, spelling and grammar mistakes. 

I think your story, Somnia, is a refreashing sort of story, and something that isn't cliched or over used, and I like that. Just remember to stay true to your sort of writing style and audeince- your story will do the rest!

PS- UPDATE SOON!!! The more you update and the frequently you update also help your story! C'mon! Do it, Do it, Do it! =P 

~~*~~*~<3~*~~*~~

~Overall, I give your story: 8 out of 10 :)

~I'm SOO sorry it took this long to get your review out! I actually read your story wayyy before I wrote this, I guess I was just being lazy lol. I'm also sorry if I said something that might've offended you! That wasn't my intention at ALL!

~Good news! If you want to get interviewed, you can now! Just PM @Totallyinsane and she'll let you know what to do next!

~To anyone else who wants to check out Somnia, you can! it's in our Library, or you can click the External Link to go check it out!

~~*~~*~<3~*~~*~~

A Pinkypromise99 review

~~*~~*~<3~*~~*~~