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Cinderella's Fangs by Forcade (Review: Pinkypromise99)

Author: Forcade

Title: Cinderella's Fangs

Genre: Romance, Vampire

Rating: PG-13

Blurb: Cinderella isn't new to hard work and being ill treated by her stepsisters. She has dreams and held on to it. One day Cinderella hopes it'll come true. A true prince just for her. But fate might give her something unexpected.

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Review: 

Two words: Beautifully Written.

Honestly! I found nothing wrong with your story, and as I was reading it to find something to critique, I found nothing and ended up just reading your story to enjoy it. So since I found nothing to critique, I'm just going to write about what I love in the two chapters I had time to read :)

First of all, I loved how you introduced Cindy and her family and background. It wasn't forced and it was easy to follow, which is VERY important in the beginning of a story. Already, I dislike Cinderella's step-sisters and I'm guessing Madame Zaraf is not only a vampire...but maybe the "God mother" of the story? 

Plus, I think Cinderella's Fangs is original. Its a mixture of the over-used vampire story line that we have, BUT it's mixed with the classic tale of Cinderella. Personally, I think that was a wise move. Since everyone basically knows what Cinderella is about, you really don't have to worry about adding too many details that would make the story cluttered or forced, so all you have (or want) to write about is whatever you need! (or want)....get it? (I'm not sure if I made sense there...) 

Anyway. Its good a mixture you've created there, and I think it'll work! It's like turning two things that are both very known and then add a dash of you're personal uniqueness into it! and then *bam!* you've got a hit! :) lol

All in all, I'm liking where Cinderella's Fangs is going so continue writing! But! Even though I didn't see anything that needed critiquing and you've a cool story line going, keep on writing! lol No matter how well you already are, you can and will still improve. So keep on writing!! 

Best of luck with Cinderella's Fangs! :) 

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My Rating: 10 out of 10! *I really did enjoy reading it! lol

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Anyone else wanna check out this cool, unique book? Go to our library! It's there :)

Personal note: I'm soo sooo sorry I got you're review in this late, that wasn't my intention. I have tons of school work and other priorities, and while this isnt an excuse, i'm still sorry! 

~*~Review by: Pinkypromise99~*~