Title- Luna Brown- Ignored, Forgotten
Author- EllieTyler562
Genre- Teen Fiction/Humour
Rating- G
Review
(loving the picture for your cover! XD)
Your blurb is short and good but a small spelling mistake with 'there', should be 'they're'!
The prologue is intruiging and interesting and makes the reader ask a couple of questions. It is also sad yet heart-warming; very sincere and realistic. It is also sweet :)
The start of the chapter is interesting with a couple of spelling mistakes but also answers a few of the questions originally wanting to be asked in the prologue.
It is a bit cliche with the groups but you manage to add a bit of humour in with Sophia's crushes.
The introduction to the fire is a bit rushed and you could make it a bit more tense and descriptive but when you get to Sophia you become descriptive and it is sweet again.
The ending leaves a good cliffhanger, making the reader want to read on and know more.
Rating
4.5 - you could be a bit more descriptive and the plot isn't very certain yet, although that can almost certainly be put down to only being two parts so far!
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