Judge Me Not

Angels in the Shadows of Demons by Kittyheartscupcakes (Review: Pinkypromise99)

Author: Kittyheartscupcakes

Title: Angels in the Shadows of Demons

Genre: Fantasy/Paranormal

Rating: PG-13

Blurb: The clock strikes ten and we all go astray the clock strikes eleven and the shadows come out to play the clock strike twelve and we all fade away… 

The sands of time have started to flow and everything has been set into motion. Enticed by the shadows they lure you in slithering across your flesh, embracing you like a long lost friend. You dance amongst them, but unbeknownst to you, you’ve stumbled into the rabbit’s hole. A dark fairy tale is unfolding and you wish to escape but it’s too late. Amongst the shadows your pleas cannot be heard. 

The stage has been set and the play must begin. You would do well to remember that appearances can be deceiving. That good and evil can become as twisted as the human heart. Good intentions could easily become the dagger in your back when right and wrong become muddled. Are you good or are you evil? A soul twisted with sin, your wrongs are reflecting back at you. Before the curtains close which path will you choose?

Enchantingly wicked and twisted with sin. Do you dare turn the page?

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                                                                           Review:

I only read the first chapter, and a little of the second chapter, but what I read I enjoyed. Usually, it annoys me whenever there isn't enough details when I'm reading something, but with the prologue you wrote I was strangely satisfied. I loved how the mood and setting kind of played out by it self without having too much details written about it. Of course it made me curious and want to read more (good sign, good sign) and it always made my imagination run (really good sign). To my understanding-from the blurb- I get that Zelex (such a hot name!!) is the angel, and I thought you did a good job of writing out his character in both the prologue and chapter 1. 

I also loved the mystery going on between Zelex, the girl in the prologue, and Sarah. The only thing I thought needed revising was the type of narrative style you used. In the prologue it was first person and then in the first chapter it was kind of a mixture between second and first person. 

Here's an example, if you're not sure what they are: Second person- 

The second-person narrative is a narrative mode in which the protagonist or another main character is referred to by employment of second-person personal pronouns and other kinds of addressing forms, for example the English second-person pronoun "you".

-This is the narrative I'm using in this review. 

Here's an example of first person narrative- 

First-person narrative is a narrative mode where a story is narrated by one character at a time, speaking for and about themselves. First-person narrative may be singular, plural or multiple as well as being an authoritative, reliable or deceptive "voice" and represents point of view in the writing.

-This is narrative you used in the prologue, and the narrative most authors use when they write. 

I hope this helps! But basically, that was the only flaw I found, other than that, I thought you're story was intriguing and promising :)

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I rate you're story (well what I read of it) as 6.5 out of 10!

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~*~Reviewed by: PInkypromise99~*~