Okay, I've been rereading this story and let's just say, CRINGE! 😫 I started beating my head against my textbook. I can't stand reading this so I'm going to change the story...not completely. I'm just going to make it somewhat better.
I wrote this on Instagram...when I was stupid. So it's not the best, like it's real bad, yet, people seem to like it due to all the views and votes 😂
Plus, some of the chapters I gave up on and legit made it look like a script.
Example;
Carson: "She's really beautiful and cute," That hurt...
Carson: "She's this crazy, brave girl, that's not afraid of anything. She's also really talented and she can be such a tease sometimes. She drives me crazy, but in a good way. Her smile can light up a room," That killed me...
Like why???? 🤦♀️
So with this being said, expect a somewhat better story and you can reread this story from the beginning when I fix it. But it might take a while since school is starting soon (kms) and there's so much damage to this story that it's definitely going to take a long, long time.
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I Promise | Carson Lueders
FanfictionA fifteen year old girl moves across the country to LA and along the way runs into her first friend from the celebrity city. But becoming close to Carson lures in jealous people that brings bags filled with drama. Can Rachell and Carson hold up both...
