Type Of Story: 1D
Author: yaccuzoh
Story Rating: Not Rated
Reads: 1,358
Votes: 150
Comments: 84
Description:
Of course, leprechauns are just myths and legends that actually don't exist. But when Patricia gets tailed by a lad who abruptly says he's a leprechaun - that's another story.
Suggested If: you like mythological stories
My Review: I'll be honest. When I first saw the title of this book, I thought it was going to be some cliché story about how a 12 year old fangirl kidnaps Niall or some shit. But I can easily say that I actually really, really like the plot. I'm a little confused on how Patricia (forgive me if I spelt her name wrong lol) and Niall actually met so I'm not quite sure if that's fault on your end or fault on mine and if I need to just go back and reread the beginning or something. But overall, I do like the plot and I absolutely love Niall's character-though I warn you not to make him go from all innocent and cuddly to darker just like that *snaps fingers.* Maybe go into Niall's POV or something and explain what is happening? But anyway, I like your different chapter lengths and your grammar and spelling is pretty good, just needs a little bit of work. For example, it's 'got' not 'gotten' (I saw that once or twice in the story lol). However, I understand that you're from the Phillippines and I am going to assume that English isn't your first language, which is okay (: I have a friend from Puerto Rico who has the same problem. I'd just work on stuff like that some more. Overall, I can say that I was pleasantly surprised with this story!
Note to Author: Despite Niall being Irish, this is actually the first fanfic I've seen where he is an honest to God leprechaun xD props to you, man
Rating (1-5): 4
Other Notes: Patricia is a secret leprechaun 0.0 (if you saw my comment on one of the chapters you'd understand)
