Fanfic Review: Mental |Louis Tomlinson A.U.|

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Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic

Author: A_Thousand_Miles

Story Rating: PG-13

Reads: 6,895

Votes: 730

Comments: 156

Description:

❝Monsters weren't under his bed.

They were inside of his head.❞

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Suggested If: You like fics where one of the boys is "insane"

My Review: I freaking love the plot, it reminds me somewhat of Psychotic at first and I love Psychotic. Your grammar and spelling is near perfect, I think the only major flaw I seemed to notice is that it was sometimes hard to follow who was speaking and who wasn't. Other than that though you don't seem to have a problem and I like your 4 page chapter lengths. Overall I think this story is freaking amazing and it's one of my new favorites

Note To Author: Consider yourself followed!

Rating (1-5): 10,474,257

Other Notes: Can I pretty pretty please give this story a shoutout? It deserves more reads *_*

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