Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: YsaMaria_23
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 4,296
Votes: 190
Comments: 122
Description:
❝His lies became my truth, and my truth became his biggest advantage.❞
Describing someone would seem simple at first glance. It seems as though it becomes second nature, a habit, even a mere tactic to make you feel somewhat better about who you are. But, when one feeble roam of your eyes depicts someone so perfectly, it feels as though you're looking at yourself. Is there really much else for you to know?
Suggested If: You like rare fics where the girl has some sort of disability
My Review: I really like the plot even though there are only six chapters so far. I like the fact that the main character is blind because I am legally blind in my left eye and I can relate to the situation and I like all the plot twists involving Harry. I like your chapter lengths too-three pages is not too long, but not too short. As for spelling and grammar I don't think there's much you need to work on besides the occasional typo or two. Overall, I really like it!
Note To Author: I'd definitely continue it (:
Rating (1-5): 4.5
Other Notes: I'm thinking of Jenna from PLL right now lol
