Type Of Story: 1D/5SOS
Author: Michaels_thot
Story Rating: Not Rated
Reads: 8,916
Votes: 442
Comments: 139
Description: After One Direction split up, Niall Horan decided to start hanging out with 5 Seconds Of Summer more. He soon figured out Luke and Ashton was together and Calum and Michael was together as well. With Niall living with them with No girlfriend he ended up being in a situation he doesn't really want to be in
Suggested If: you like vampire/werewolf fics
My Review: I might as well come out and say it...the plot makes no sense whatsoever. First, Niall is their fuck buddy and then all of a sudden oh BOOM they're suddenly vampires. Also, there are huge plot holes, especially with Elounor and Larry. I mean first, Louis is dating Eleanor and then the next day he's suddenly dating Harry. And you literally added the Taylor stuff just for the excuse to bitch about Haylor, it added no plot development whatsoever. Your chapters could definitely be longer and, you don't use text talk which is good, but your grammar and spelling needs a lot of work. Overall, this story could definitely use a lot of editing.
Note to Author: Edit!
Rating (1-5): 1
Other Notes: I know I didn't get a request to review this, my friend was messing with my Wattpad and found this story and added it lol (probably because the word 'sex' is in the title and she's a dirty bastard). I was like "oh fuck it, I'll give it a shot" annnd this review was the result
