Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: ziamking
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 6,761
Votes: 225
Comments: 62
Description:
There's a summary, but it's in the Wattpad chapters and I can't copy and paste that shiz
Suggested If: You ship Narry and/or Ziam
My Review: I really like the overall plot (because lets face it, dark Narry is hot and adding some Ziam is even hotter) and I think the chapters are very well written. There are a couple mistakes throughout, but they're so infrequent that I think they were just simple typo mistakes. Really, your most frequent typo is putting a comma, period, exclamation mark, or question mark on the outside of the ending quotation instead of on the inside. Really though, it's nothing you need to worry about. Overall, it's a really good fanfic and you should continue it!
Note To Author: You ever hear the expression, "The author is their own worst critic?" Well, my friend, that is you.
Rating (1-5): 4.5. The only thing keeping me from giving this story a full 5 stars is the fact that it's on hold, damn you -.-
Other Notes: I honestly think that this story is the best out of all your stories and one shots.
