Fanfic Review: Dark Side (A Dark Narry/ Side Ziam AU) [On Hold!]

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Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic

Author: ziamking

Story Rating: PG-13

Reads: 6,761

Votes: 225

Comments: 62

Description:

There's a summary, but it's in the Wattpad chapters and I can't copy and paste that shiz

Suggested If: You ship Narry and/or Ziam

My Review: I really like the overall plot (because lets face it, dark Narry is hot and adding some Ziam is even hotter) and I think the chapters are very well written. There are a couple mistakes throughout, but they're so infrequent that I think they were just simple typo mistakes. Really, your most frequent typo is putting a comma, period, exclamation mark, or question mark on the outside of the ending quotation instead of on the inside. Really though, it's nothing you need to worry about. Overall, it's a really good fanfic and you should continue it!

Note To Author: You ever hear the expression, "The author is their own worst critic?" Well, my friend, that is you.

Rating (1-5): 4.5. The only thing keeping me from giving this story a full 5 stars is the fact that it's on hold, damn you -.-

Other Notes: I honestly think that this story is the best out of all your stories and one shots.

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