Type Of Story: 1D
Author: cascia46
Story Rating: Not Rated
Reads: 325
Votes: 50
Comments: 11
Description: I THE CHAPTERS VERY SLOWLY COZ I AM UPDATING THE ONES I HAVE ALREADY DONE
The tittle says all
(Not that scary)
MORDERNISED
Suggested If: you like horror stories
My Review: I like the fact that the plot is based off of The Conjuring because I loved that movie, however, I do wish that the plot had SOME unique elements of its own. Though, I do like how the story steers away from the romantic element of every other 1D fanfic on the planet. Your chapters are kind of short and I think it would definitely add to the story if they were more descriptive and longer...say 2-3 pages? Also, your grammar and spelling needs a LOT of work. Like, I wanted to enjoy the plot because it's based on a movie that I really, really like, but I was too distracted by all of the mistakes. There were a lot of typos, the sentences were choppy and sometimes split up into different sentences, and sometimes it was really hard to tell what was happening. Overall, I think this story could be a lot better if you focus on how the content in the story itself looks.
Note to Author: I noticed that after I started reading, you added 'Major Editing' into the title and I hope that's true. This story could use a lot of it.
Rating (1-5): 1
Other Notes: Not really related to the story itself, but I really like the cover xD
