Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: JumpFlySoar
Story Rating: PG
Reads: 5,778
Votes: 97
Comments: 42
Description:
Molly planed to go to London and spend some needed time with her friend, but plans change. Beth, Molly's best friend, finds a way for Molly to still have her dream vacation and get paid. But there might be consequences. Housesitting for One Direction may sound like an easy task, but it isn't. With love and hate in the air all at once, things could get a little... complicated.
Suggested If: You like Harry fics where the boys are famous
My Review: The plot is pretty Carroty and cliche, but I do like how you were able to bring Molly's mother into the mix. Even though the plot itself isn't the greatest or the most unique, I like your chapter lengths of 1-3 pages and your grammar/spelling is really really good, excellent even. There isn't really much you need to work on grammar or spelling wise. Overall, the plot isn't the best, but you definitely know how to write a good story grammar and spelling wise.
Note To Author: I'd continue it (:
Rating (1-5): Plot: 2
Grammar/Spelling: 4, maybe even 5
Other Notes: I think if you just took the time to come up with a more original plot, you could create a really really good story (:
