Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: jewels-
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 433
Votes: 104
Comments: 16
Description:
[a.u] in which a boy falls out of love, and a girl that teaches him how to love again. / jewels- 2014
Suggested If: You like stories with short, easy to read chapters
My Review: I think the plot goes a liiittle too fast, but I like the overall concept of it and I like how you split up your chapters. Normally I'd suggest longer chapters, but I actually think that the short chapters work for this story. Your grammar and spelling is fairly good, but I'd definitely work on capitalization. You ALWAYS capitalize things like the first letter of a sentence, proper nouns and names (ex: Target or Anthony), and you ALWAYS capitalize the 'I' in things like I, I'm, I've, I'd, etcetera. Overall though, for a first fanfic it's pretty good.
Note To Author: I'd definitely update!
Rating (1-5): 3.5 or maybe even 4 if you go back and edit the capitalization problem
Other Notes: I really like it so far!
