Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: A_kristy_StylesX
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 9,041
Votes: 758
Comments: 177
Description:
"So who are you going to choose?"
Suggested If: you like "love triangle" fics where the boys are famous
My Review: The plotline is kinda cliche, but flows really well and is really well written. I like all of the varying chapter lengths and your grammar and spelling is pretty good, there was just an occasional your/you're and there/their/they're mixup that I'd go back and look at. The fact that Courtney had four famous dudes crushing on her at one point was pretty overwhelming-I mean I can't even get one mediocre dude to like me let alone four famous flawless dudes so xD I'm glad it eventually went down to just Harry and Niall. The Ed thing was kinda random though...like he was there for one chapter before dropping off the face of the planet o.O overall, the plot itself isn't the best but the fanfic is decent (:
Note to Author: okay so I found this in my Reviews reading list, but don't even remember getting a request for it? If you requested for a review a long time ago and I just now did it then omfg I'm sorry, sometimes I get so many reviews that one or two of them get forgotten. If you didn't ask for one then I probably put your story in the reading list by accident xD so I hope this was helpful in some way?
Rating (1-5): 3
Other Notes: Shorten them ANs a bit guuurl
