Type Of Story: 5SOS Fanfic
Author: mikeysnuggybear6 (I love your name omg)
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 807
Votes: 179
Comments: 174
Description:
Once upon a time, in my boring life, a boy came along and taught me about the importance of bananas, How To Get Someone's Attention Subtly, the Differences between Love and Sex, and how to love oneself before you can truly love another.
Our story starts with fruit.
{Nominated in the 5SOS Watty Awards by CrissCrossAwards ! Check it out, vote for your favourites, mine is in the Best Ashton category!}
Warning: } is a good Green Day song omf} there will be sexual themes and language in this.
All Rights Reserved. © Shayanne - mikeysnuggybear6
Suggested If: You like Ashton fics that're cute and fluffy
My Review: I like the plot. It's cute and simple, not that extravagant, but I like the simplicity of it. It's kinds cheesy, but it's not so cheesy that it's unbearable. It's more like a butterflies in your stomach, "aww moment" sort of cheesy (x I like the chapter lengths, they're not one pagers, but not so unbearably long that you can't read it. The grammar and spelling was also really good, I don't think there's much you need to work on with that. Overall, it was a cute read.
Note To Author: I'd definitely continue it (:
Rating (1-5): 4
Other Notes: I'm also really glad you didn't make Michael and Calum bad guys omf. It seems like in every fic they're some sort of villian and it pains my Mikey girl heart!
