Type Of Story: 1D/5SOS/Our2ndLife fanfic
Author: KristaChartrand
Story Rating: R
Reads: 781
Votes: 77
Comments: 15
Description:
Krista is a 17 year old girl who was abused by her father and brother. Mary is Krista sister who was also abused. Krista and Mary both move to Cheshire, England to get away from their abusive father. Krista then falls for the jock of the school. Harry. Harry likes Krista but he keeps hurting her. What will happen? Will their relationship work out or will Harry's abusiveness get in the way?
Suggested If: You like love triangles (the girl, Niall, and J.C. Caylen)
My Review: The plotline isn't the best and I found the beginning a bit confusing, but it gets a bit better from there. You're also improving with chapter length-you've gone from 2-3 paragraphs to 1-3 FULL pages worth of chapters. It's also a pretty decent length chapter wise too, but your grammar and spelling needs a LOT of work.
Note To Author: do NOT use text talk whenever the story is anything, besides texting. So like, if a character is speaking or something, do NOT use "u" instead of "you" and things like that.
Rating (1-5): 1.5-2
Other Notes: I would try to complete this fanfic since you're so far into it and then spend a LOT more time planning/organizing your second story (if you plan to write one that is).
