Type Of Story: 5SOS
Author: Broken_Feather
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 103
Votes: 7
Comments: 1
Description:
Michael's heart was shattered, just like the windshield of the car that hit Ellie Baker.
Suggested If: you like sadder (I think?) stories
My Review: The plot is, once again, sort of hard to judge right now. I think the whole car accident/amnesia/coma thing sounds a little more cliche than your other story, but what do I know? You could go anywhere with it right now, seeing as there's only one chapter posted. As for grammar and spelling, the things I said in your other review (should be right before this one) still stand. Good luck with wherever your stories take you!
Note to Author: Keep writing!
Rating (1-5): I'm going to give the story a 3 right now, but it may go up to a 4 or even a 5 once you post more chapters!
Other Notes: I hope the reviews were helpful somehow omfg idek since there really wasn't much to review
