Type Of Story: 5SOS
Author: CharaZavrou
Story Rating: Not Rated
Reads: 877
Votes: 29
Comments: 2
Description:
All of us have secrets. And we call them secrets for a reason. Because we don't want people to know. Lexy is an 18 year-old girl who is happy for the first time in her life after her mother's death. She can smile again and all that thanks to her boyfriend, Luke. He is the most honest and loyal boyfriend a girl could have. And nice! He is very very nice, almost so nice that it is impossible to believe. What really happens when Lexy finds out that Luke isn't who she thinks he is..? What will happen when Lexy discovers Luke's darkest secret?
Suggested If: you like short, dark stories
My Review: The plot is very...interesting. Very dark, but I like it. Although, Luke's secret is kind of cliche and predictable. I mean, he's cheating. That's one of the most obvious secrets to be completely honest. Although, I do like how it's formatted so that you're the main character. I think I've only seen those types of stories once or twice in fanfics. I like the varying chapter lengths, but your grammar needs some work. ESPECIALLY when and when not to space paragraphs. The story's laid out very run-onish and choppily and, even though I like the plot, it does go by VERY fast. Overall, definitely not the worst fanfic ever, but definitely not the best either-it could use a lot of work.
Note to Author: Work on the format of those chapters girl (;
Rating (1-5): 2, maaaaybe 2.5
Other Notes: Congrats on completing the story!
