Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: fanning1d
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 95
Votes: 10
Comments: 2
Description:
Will he destroy the only one he once loved and treasured the most?
Or Will he change his already decided destiny?
All Rights Reserved, ©fanning1d 2014.
Suggested If: You like dark Niall fics
My Review: I really like the plot and, even though I would normally think the plot goes a little fast, I think the speed of the plot is good for this story. I dunno why, it just seems to fit. Your grammar and spelling is pretty good too, there are just a few things that I would maybe work on. One of those things is sentence fluency. Sometimes there were a few sentences that just didn't seem to make sense. But besides that and just checking over typos, I wouldn't worry about things too much. Overall it's not the best story ever, but so far it's pretty decent. (:
Note To Author: I'd continue!
Rating (1-5): 3
Other Notes: Sorry for any typos omg I usually do Fanfic Reviews on my iPad and autocorrect is being more of a bitch than usual for some reason
