I'm half asleep so I apologize for any mistakes!
Type Of Story: 5SOS Fanfic
Author: Elle_Jay
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 15,777
Votes: 1,704
Comments: 1,251
Description:
"It's amazing how wrong you can be about someone"
Suggested If: You like fics with lots of drama
My Review: The plot definitely took me on a major rollercoaster ride. Seriously I was like, "Okay, I like how three of them don't like the chic, it's different from them all being 'in love' with her" then I was like "oh God, if they all suddenly pronounce their love for her Imma fuckin shoot a hoe" then I was like "o.o PLOT TWIST." xD but I'd say overall I really like the plot. There were a few moments where I thought the plot would take a cliche turn for the worst, but you saved the plot from going downhill so props for that. Your grammar and spelling is really good-I'd say your biggest issue was at the beginning of the story, you'd forget to capitalize "I" and you forgot apostrophes in things like "I'm" "I've" etc. But it's not too much you need to worry about. Overall, I really like the story. It's a simple idea, but you've made it unique (:
Note To Author: Continue!
Rating (1-5): I literally changed the rating so many times, but I think now I've settled on...a 5!
Other Notes: Congrats on this being the second story of yours to earn a 5 from me (:
