Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: Eleasah_Horan
Story Rating: PG-13 (it should be R because of the sex scene)
Reads: 1,239
Votes: 98
Comments: 73
Description: His innocent exterior was the best disguise for the devils bidding. What happens when he is given a task to kill a stranger to prove he is worthy? What if he falls in love? Impossible he is a heartless killer... So he thought (BoyxBoy)
Suggested If: You like supernatural type Ziall fics
My Review: I love the plot. Even though there aren't that many chapters yet, I think the plot is very easy to catch on to and very distinguished. Plus I just have a thing for both demonic type stories and Ziall so xD it might go just a liiiittle fast, but I don't think you need to worry about it too much (: your grammar and spelling is fairly decent, there are just a few things you need to work on. Mainly I think your biggest issues are dialogue-whenever a new character is speaking you ALWAYS want to remember to create a new paragraph-and sentence choppiness. Some sentences were just a little hard to read. Overall though I'd say it's a pretty decent (first?) fanfic
Note To Author: I'd continue (:
Rating (1-5): 3
Other Notes: A friend of the author asked me to review this so if the author herself wants me to take this down I will (:
