Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: kiralove7
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 13,965
Votes: 471
Comments: 28
Description:
(Book 1) This is my story.
Hey I'm Kira, I'm 17 years old. I was just a girl from the US who moved to England in search for adventure, little did I know I would find adventure soon enough. I thought my life was great, I missed my family but I was still content with where I was and what I had. I thought I had it all, wonderful family, awesome friends, BUT then One Direction showed up in the coffee shop I work at and now my life couldn't get better right!? My idols, the boys I love! But every thing changed.
"Can you come and sit with us on your break?"
The chapters with '*Done*' on them are edited and ready to read. Others WITHOUT that are NOT edited and are NOT ready to read. Thank you. This book has copyright any copying will be reported and you will get in trouble so DO NOT COPY the book!
Suggested If: You like Liam fics where the boys are famous
My Review: The plot is EXTREMELY cliche, but that's to be expected because it was your first fanfic and first fanfics are never the most original. I like all of your different chapter lengths and I like how descriptive you are with things, but your grammar and spelling needs some work. It's good that you went back and tried to fix it, but it could use some more editing. Overall it definitely isn't the best fanfic ever, but I admire how you were able to complete it with a whole 42 chapters!
Rating (1-5): 2
Other Notes: Good luck with your other stories!
