Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: tearevolutions
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 277
Votes: 44
Comments: 47
Description:
We're all in the same game; just different levels. Dealing with the same hell; just different devils.
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Suggested If: You fics where the girl is related to one of the (nonfamous) boys.
My Review: The plot is a little cliche, especially in the sense that Liam, Zayn, and Louis ALL want to be involved with Clover lustfully and/or romantically, but it's not so cliche to the point where it's unbearable. Your grammar and spelling is really good too (which can be somewhat surprising since two people are writing the story). I'd say your biggest issue is too many commas, but I'm pretty sure I have the same problem too and I'd rather have too many commas than none at all to be honest. Overall, it's not the most perfect story in the world, but it's pretty good...especially for a first fanfic.
Note To Author: Definitely continue (:
Rating (1-5): 4
Other Notes: The biggest thing I wanna know is why Clover is living with her aunt and uncle instead of Niall omg.
