Type Of Story: Shawn Mendes
Author: LittleMissCreativity
Story Rating: Apparently Wattpad's rating system is fucking up or something so uh
Reads: 8,295
Votes: 819
Comments: 375
Description:
16-year old Emma Saunders has felt nothing but alone since the death of her mother. Her brother has gone off to college and her dad has busied himself with work. All she wants to do is graduate and leave Toronto, Ontario. That is, until, a brown-eyed boy named Shawn comes along, and changes everything...
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SORRY, THIS IS ON HOLD FOR NOW. MAJOR EDITING BEING DONE.
Suggested If: you're a fan of Shawn Mendes
My Review: The plot is cliche, but it's cute. I like the speed of it and how Shawn and Emma don't snog within three chapters, though the actual timeline itself is kind of hard to follow. Like, has Emma lived there for a week? A month? Six months? Idk. I do like your chapter lengths (even though they're a little hard to judge now since Wattpad decided to fuck up to format) and your grammar and spelling is pretty good. Overall, not the most unique story ever, but I'd continue!
Note to Author: Sorry this took so long to get out!
Rating (1-5): 3.5
Other Notes: I don't know much about Shawn Mendes so I looked him up and I don't remember everything, but I do remember he's like less than a month older than me O.O his birthday is like August 8th 1998 (I think?) and mine is September 4th 1998 xD