A/N: I'm tired, sick, and feel like shit so I apologize for any typos and/or any sentences that might sound weird (plus I'm typing on an iPad and autocorrect doesn't help either lol).
Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: Meshii
Story Rating: R
Reads: 25,082
Votes: 578
Comments: 294
Description:
There's a description, but it's posted as a chapter and I can't copy and paste that.
Suggested If: You like Louis fics where he helps a "broken" girl.
My Review: The plotline is slightly cliche with the girl being abused by her father, but I just wanna say THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for not making it one of those stupid fics where the girl runs into a huge popstaron the street and they fall in love within two chapters. If it were one of those types of stories, I would've screamed and ripped my hair out. Your grammar/spelling is pretty decent with the exceptional typo or two. I think the most frequent mistake I saw was the mix up of to and too. I like the chapter lengths too-they varied anywhere from 2-6 pages, which I think is a good length for chapters-they aren't one pagers, but not long enough where the chapters absolutely drag on. Overall though, I liked the plot and you seem to be a pretty good writer (:
Note To Author: It was a nice story. Not the most unique in the world, but I enjoyed it (:
Rating (1-5): 4
Other Notes: I probably won't read the sequel-I'm not too fond of sequels and I never find them as interesting as the first book. But the first book was definitely worth reading (:
