Fanfic Review: my everything ➸ ziall mpreg

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Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic

Author: ziallmoans (your name is life okay)

Story Rating: PG-13

Reads: 4,486

Votes: 536

Comments: 705

Description:

[ONGOING]

❝Your first love is always alive and lives all the time in your heart. How much you try to forget, it never goes away from your heart.❞

Niall has been a single father of his four year old son, Tate. But one day, things get complicated because his super successful boyfriend shows up again.

[ pairings: ziall horlik with side of larry stylinson ]

[ highest ranking; #50 in short story / #44 in random ]

© ziallmoans 2014

Suggested If: You ship Ziall and/or Larry

My Review: I really really like the plot, it's so adorable and perfect and umpfh. Ziall is my OTP and even though I don't ship Larry in the slightest (the three bromances I DON'T ship are Larry, Niam and Lirry), I don't even mind the Larry moments in the story. I like all your varying page lengths and your grammar and spelling is pretty good-I'd just look at the occasional typo and the mix up of using past and present tense. I also love your references to 'the author' cause it's unique and funny xD Overall though this story is so freaking cute and omg.

Note To Author: Tate is perf

Rating (1-5): 4

Other Notes: If anything else I'd just remember to NOT put any ANs in the middle of a chapter c:

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