Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: ziallmoans (your name is life okay)
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 4,486
Votes: 536
Comments: 705
Description:
[ONGOING]
❝Your first love is always alive and lives all the time in your heart. How much you try to forget, it never goes away from your heart.❞
Niall has been a single father of his four year old son, Tate. But one day, things get complicated because his super successful boyfriend shows up again.
[ pairings: ziall horlik with side of larry stylinson ]
[ highest ranking; #50 in short story / #44 in random ]
© ziallmoans 2014
Suggested If: You ship Ziall and/or Larry
My Review: I really really like the plot, it's so adorable and perfect and umpfh. Ziall is my OTP and even though I don't ship Larry in the slightest (the three bromances I DON'T ship are Larry, Niam and Lirry), I don't even mind the Larry moments in the story. I like all your varying page lengths and your grammar and spelling is pretty good-I'd just look at the occasional typo and the mix up of using past and present tense. I also love your references to 'the author' cause it's unique and funny xD Overall though this story is so freaking cute and omg.
Note To Author: Tate is perf
Rating (1-5): 4
Other Notes: If anything else I'd just remember to NOT put any ANs in the middle of a chapter c:
