Type Of Story: 5SOS
Author: FictionalSkies
Story Rating: Not Rated
Reads: 503
Votes: 20
Comments: 2
Description:
the doctor is in
Inspired by:
Remember to Forget
By:
Smilelikeniall
Suggested If: you like love triangle sort of situations
My Review: I think the plotline goes kinda fast and sorta jumps around a littlr, but overall I really like it. Your grammar and spelling is pretty good too. Really the only thing that needs work is, it's sort of hard to tell whether or not Evelyn is actually talking or just using the app on her phone. If I were you, I'd italicize the speech when she does use the app so that way it's easier to tell. Overall though, I think this fanfic is pretty good c:
Note to Author: Keep writing!
Rating (1-5): 4
Other Notes: When Evelyn told Ashton that she trusted him, was she actually talking or just using the app?
