Type Of Story: Creepypasta
Author: FacelessFacepalm
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 322
Votes: 41
Comments: 9
Description:
Nicole Blackwood wasn't your average teenager. She had a pretty normal life, up until the day her boyfriend 'died'. Everyone thought he'd committed suicide, everyone except Nicole. She tried to look for clues to who the murderer might be, but since her dad was a policeman, she couldn't do much. The whole town thought she was crazy, and everyone at school called her a 'freak'. Sometimes, they'd even follow her home and throw stuff at her house. One day, her bully, Cassie, started walking home with her, but stopped halfway, in the woods. Jeff decided to kill Cassie. Nicole tried to save her, but ended up being scarred for life, after seeing Jeff's face. Will Nicole be Jeff's next victim? Or will Jeff just haunt her for the rest of her life?
Suggested If: you like Creepypasta and/or Jeff the Killer
My Review: The story is very well written, but the plot is a bit...odd? Idk, I just can't picture Jeff the Killer falling in love with someone xD the plot is also a little fast, but I like the plot twist in chapter seven. I like all your chapter lengths and your grammar and spelling is really, really good. The only thing I'd work on is dialogue-sometimes it's hard to tell who's talking and who's not. Overall though, the fanfic is pretty good
Note to Author: I'm a little confused as to whether or not chapter seven is the last chapter?
Rating (1-5): 3.5
Other Notes: I know most of the Creepypastas, but who's Sally?
