Fanfic Review: Memories [H.S AU]

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Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic

Author: kellzavadil

Story Rating: PG-13

Reads: 657

Votes: 51

Comments: 2

Description:

"This must be a new thing for me, because it used to be time was faster when I was happy. As for pain... Pain is my life now. So it seems like a long time for that to pass by."

Suggested If: You like sad, yet fluffy Harry fics

My Review: I am absolutely in love with the plot, I'm almost speechless. I usually don't care for when people use themselves as characters, but Z just felt so real and alive, it was like I was reading about an actual person (which I guess I sort of was xD). Your chapter lengths are perfect and you have really good spelling and grammar-the only things I'd fix are that it's sometimes hard to tell who's speaking and the occasional spelling error. But overall I'm SUPER glad I reviewed this fic, it actually had me crying or laughing at some parts, and it was fucking perfect.

Rating (1-5): FIVE

Other Notes: THIS DESERVES MORE THAN A MILLION READS GO READ IT NOW OR ELSE ._.

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