Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: KayleahLeedham
Story Rating: No Rating
Reads: 6,179
Votes: 204
Comments: 7
Description:
One direction adopt 3 teen girls their names are Elizabeth, Joanne and Jane. What did they adopt them for? U ask to find the perfect girl for Zayn, Niall and Louis. Can they find one? Will they need to find a girlfriend for Harry and Liam? Read to find out.
Suggested If: You like fics that have a lot of chapters, but they're short and easy to read.
My Review: The plot is pretty cliche and Carroty, but I do kind of like how the girls had to help 1D find girlfriends. Lol that was kind of cute. I'd try to make your chapters a little longer, though your chapter length isn't the worst in the world. However, your grammar and spelling needs a LOT of work. A little bit of everything could use some editing.
Note To Author: I can not express this enough. When you write, do NOT NOT NOT use text talk.
Rating (1-5): 1-1.5
Other Notes: Go back and edit those chapters!
