Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: Teejay_19
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 98
Votes: 10
Comments: 3
Description:
(Liam Payne Fan-Fic)
Suggested If: You like fics with short chapters that're quick and easy to read
My Review: I feel like the plot goes a bit too fast, but overall I really like the plot itself. It's a simple, but cute plot and though I would like for the chapters to be a bit longer, but I don't think it's much you need to worry about. I think your grammar and spelling is pretty good though you have a few problems with dialogue. This includes separating paragraphs when a new/different character is speaking and sometimes, it's really hard to tell who's speaking. However, if you just fix these problems, I think the fic could end up being really good (:
Note To Author: You should update!
Rating (1-5): 3.5
Other Notes: This story definitely deserves more reads, despite the dialogue problems (:
