Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: NeverlandDreamer821
Story Rating: PG-13
Description:
Have you ever wondered if they were out there,
Watching over us.
Protecting us.
I for one can never say I have.
I always thought that they were pure fiction.
Just something you could find in books and movies.
But was I wrong.
They are real.
They do watch over us and keep us safe.
Who are 'they' you might ask?
'They' are Heroes. And they will keep us safe...No matter what the cost.
|| AU One Direction || Superheroes ||
© 2014 by NeverlandDreamer821 // All Rights Reserved //
Suggested If: You like stories that are comic book life with a lot of superheros. A story with both action and romance
My Review: I'm actually really really impressed with this story so far. It's pretty well written, with just a grammar mistake here or there (your biggest problem is the mix up of "your" and "you're") but it won't be too much of a problem for other readers-I'm just a grammar Nazi bitch xD but like I said, I'm actually really impressed with this fanfic so far. The plot line with the boys as superheros is pretty unique. I'm just worried that it'll turn into one of those cliche super hero stories where "she can't find out they're superheros because she'll be in danger and blah blah blah." I understand that might be necessary for some of the upcoming plot (I'm assuming anyway) but try and keep things unique and put your own twist to it (:
Note To Author: The story is pretty new (number of chapters wise) but I have high hopes for this fanfic! Keep writing and remember to keep it original and put your own twist on things (:
Rating (1-5): 4! Usually when a story only has a few chapters, I only give it a 2 or a 3, but I think this fanfic will turn out to be a really good read (:
Other Notes: Keep writing! I may actually keep up with this fanfic (: I really like it and I really hope it gets more reads-it deserves it!
