Type Of Story: 1D
Author: AnchoredRegrets
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 2,387
Votes: 115
Comments: 104
Description:
{An AU}
One was part of the original, baddest gangs in the world. The other was a newbie who escaped like a class A convict.
These two unexpectedly meet in the same condo complex as the Original moves in. But Newbie doesn't know she was The Harley Striker.
A badass name for a badass girl who made headlines all over the world.
Hoping for new beginnings and with some new friends, these two collide in a battle with the even newer and baddest gang. Expectations get fulfilled and now the hunters, are the hunted.
Defeaning gun shots, street and ally fights, remorse, old history and so much redrum spilled with each victim and enemy.
"Rum?" He asked.
"RedRum. Sweet and bitter all in one." I smirked.
Suggested If: you like darker fanfics
My Review: I really like the plot. I love most dark fanfics because they're not all kissy kissy and sappy all the time (except for After -cringe-) and I like how everything flows together really well. I also like the little subplots, with Lyndon and all that. I like all of the varying chapter lengths and your grammar and spelling is pretty good, though it could use a tad bit of work. Your biggest problem is mixing up words that sound the same (to/too, your/you're, words like that), but it's just a simple fix if you look up tips to help remember the difference (like, remember that you're is saying that YOU ARE something and your shows possession like "it's YOUR story") and edit the chapters. I'd also adjust the summary a bit (nothing major, some things in the summary just seem worded weird) and shorten those authors notes a bit, but overall I really, really enjoyed this fanfic!
Note to Author: Congrats on completing it (: is there a sequel?
Rating (1-5): 4.5
Other Notes: I know you said you don't read Stephen King, but the title still reminds me of The Shining xD
