Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: EmilyLoves1D22
Story Rating: G
Description:
This story is something I have been working on for a while and wanted to share it with people. Please read it and if you like it then comment and tell anyone you know to read it please thanks Emily*
Suggested If: You like stories with short chapters that are quick to read
My Review: Honestly, I wasn't too big a fan. The chapters were short and choppy and I found it hard to read because of that. BUT I know that it is your first fanfic and considering that fact, it's admirable that you've written as many as eleven chapters so far. Plus, first fanfics are never ever the best in the world. Hell, my first fanfic wasn't any good either and it's been on hold for a year xD so, because of this, I offer two suggestions. Either 1) a rewrite-take down the chapters, rewrite and edit them, and then put them back up OR 2) continue the story and finish it, and then take more time planning out and practice writing your second fanfic. I offer the second suggestion because eleven chapters is a lot for a first fanfic and to me it shows that you at least want to TRY and finish the story.
Note To Author: I really hope you consider one of the suggestions above ^^ there can be a MAJOR difference in your first fanfic and your second. I know that may sound stupid, but it's true. My first fanfic barely even has 2K reads and 60 votes and that's only because it's been up since June 2012 xD and my second fanfic Fate? It has almost 50K reads and 1K votes and it was put up an entire YEAR after my first one! So yes, I believe there is a strong difference between a person's first and second fanfic. Most of the time anyway. And there's usually a strong difference between originals and rewrites too (;
Rating (1-5): 2
Other Notes: Even though I wasn't a fan, you should definitely keep writing and who knows, maybe a rewrite and/or a second fanfic could make the leap of faith between 30 reads and 50,000 reads!
